We’re picking up again after the dinner break with a bang. Mitt Romney is up, and his masses are out to support him.
He brought in a busload of supporters to envigorate the crowd during his talk. And it got him some applause–including a round thirty seconds in–but it may have been counterproductive. At points, the applause lines were too frequent, which made Romney’s speech seem halting and made his transitions rough.
In other words, I’m going to go out on a limb here and say that Romney over-managed this event. Applause is great, but not if it prevents a speech from building and resulting in spontaneous bursts of recognition.
Romney clearly wanted to sell himself as the social conservative par excellance. Jay Sekulow from the American Center for Law and Justice introduced him, which is a coup for this audience. His speech was replete with references social con heros, including Reagen (several times), C.S. Lewis, the Bible (naturally) and James Dobson.
The speech itself was, well, not overly impressive, unless you like lists. While the other candidates could have been organized, Romney’s speech could have used a lot more depth.
Of interest in that list:
So, what’s the up-shot of Mitt’s speech?
Romney’s speech was detailed, thorough, carefully organized, and focused on practical solutions to solve real problems. And on those lines, it was far superior to anything we’ve heard yet.
Yet it was also too managerial, too focused on solving problems, to capture the imagination of the audience. He certainly didn’t capture mine. And that may be okay. He should play to his strengths, not to his weaknesses.
But in this case, I think it was a mistake. I wasn’t looking for a list of Mitt’s positions. I was looking for a thorough, detailed explication of the few key areas that matter most and a serious, thoughtful attempt to dispel the worries that I have (namely, the legitimacy of his conversion and his position on Roe vs. Wade). For this reason, I am a little disappointed in Mitt’s performance–it was strong for what it was, but I think he missed a golden opportunity to put evangelicals’ worries about his authenticity on pro-life issues to rest.